The Greens and Pinks…

Here they come
the Greens
and Pinks
All fresh
and new
their guard
Opening up

playing dead
 to start over
No more

they emerge

Definitely destined

Miraculously destined


Like the caterpillars
crawling over them,
preparing for metamorphosis,
spring flowers
and young leaves
are on
the bloom
at            last


~ smj 





12 Comments to “The Greens and Pinks…”

  1. Nice image with the words. I always admire people who do this because I don’t have the patience to do it myself. There was a poetry post I was on and it was kind of a fad among the young adults, they were really good at it and some of them were really quite amazing.

    Autumn is my favorite season, although I am glad to see spring finally get here. Summer will be here and gone before we realize it. Time has a funny way of flying the older we get. You would think it would slow down because my body can’t keep up like it used to.

    Who ever said “you’re only as young as you feel” obviously didn’t work 30 years of construction, but then again, I don’t imagine that person is feeling anything right now.

    • It’s good to “see” you Charles… thanks for the visit and nice note. I like Fall the best too.. but, Spring and Summer are very welcome. Age is a relative thing… and a favorite saying of mine is that “growing older is mandatory. growing UP is optional”… LOL… but, tell that to your aching back and knees, right? ;)

      take care and come back soon (you old fart.) JUST KIDDING ! ;) lol

  2. Yes, lovely imagery and clever placement of words :)

  3. almost as if more than Spring is coming alive over here….smiles

    been awhile…nice to see you still write beautifully….

  4. I like your new poem! :)
    Thank you for share it with us!
    A little gift for you here:

    Enjoy the moment! :)

  5. I know what you mean… It’s so hard to get them “just right.” But you did a fine job with this poem, Sam :)

  6. at last…

    nice visuals


    I invite you to join our weekly Thursday Poets Rally,
    As a fresh or first time participant,
    what you do is to comment under my post with a poem link,
    let me know,
    comment 18 poets from the perfect poet award winner list under the participants list on top…
    then let me know and done….

    poetry awards will be assigned based on your comments and poem contribution…

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