busy little ants
constructing empires of dirt
clouds loom unnoticed
~ smj
“All we do, crumbles to the ground, though we refuse to see
Dust in the wind, All we are is dust in the wind”
– Dust in the Wind, by Kansas
Just an ordinary woman… slipping away…
busy little ants
constructing empires of dirt
clouds loom unnoticed
~ smj
“All we do, crumbles to the ground, though we refuse to see
Dust in the wind, All we are is dust in the wind”
– Dust in the Wind, by Kansas
Hi!
I like that this moves from little ants to huge clouds image-wise. Empires of dirt indeed.
Oops, I think this haiku is reinforcing certain negative brainpans….
*grin*
Those damned clouds – sinister touch to a piece that would otherwise have been too pollyanna.
Always the threat of rain to wash away the hard work…
Good write.
M.L.
I dig Haikus…
Constructing bridges to my favorite writers!!!
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Ants, specially the small red ones, and the giant black colored ones.. make me squirmy!
They might be small, but they are terrifying!
love this,
the image is vivid.
This is great :)
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Happy November,
I hate ants…
Crawling all single file looking for something to bring home..
Ugh!!